Hello Rori, I like how you included everything that is important. This blog post reminds me of kayaking and when I saw a fish. I hope you had a great time at kaitawa. What was your favorite moment at camp. Reef
Hi Rori, I like your punctuation. Your blog reminds me of when we went up the bluff. I think that you could have added a bit more info. Did you enjoy Camp.
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Hey Rori,I think your blog is really good,and is nicely done with the words and most of all its.....EPIC!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Rori, I like how you included everything that is important. This blog post reminds me of kayaking and when I saw a fish. I hope you had a great time at kaitawa. What was your favorite moment at camp. Reef
ReplyDeleteHey Rori. Nice blog it was amazing,it's got every word correct and mostly is very good,and is probably the blog out there. From Oscar.
ReplyDeleteHi Rori, I like how you added punctuation and I remember going to camp - it was fun. Did you enjoy camp? I did.
ReplyDeleteHi Rori, I like your punctuation. Your blog reminds me of when we went up the bluff. I think that you could have added a bit more info. Did you enjoy Camp.
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